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by Kathryn Kuitenbrouwer, Jonathan Bennett, and Steven Galloway
Kathryn
Kuitenbrouwer's story collection
Way Up has recently been published.
Steven
Galloway has written two novels,
Finnie Walsh and Ascension.
He teaches creative writing at the University of British Columbia.
Jonathan
Bennett
is the author of the novel
After Battersea Park, the collection of short stories,
Verandah People and has a book of poems forthcoming in 2004. Jonathan
lives in Port Hope, Ontario. Kathryn:
Reunion
is a redemptive novel concerning the passage of time, written in
the voice of a fifty-something academic/poet, named Charles as he
examines his twenty-something self. It takes place at a college
reunion and is a reunion, not only among half-forgotten schoolmates
but between the two disparate aspects of Charles himself, divided
in time. Charles the elder grapples with Charles the younger and
the recounting of a love tryst during his senior year with a beautiful
but wan ballerina named, Juliana. It is a moment in time that
forever changed the course of his life.
Lightman's
thin prose gives the impression of intense clarity, a lucidity that
somehow exists outside the author. Lightman: "Because every
possible word is said and not said, every possible thought is thought
and not thought, and what is not said is still there, like the shape
of space around the edge of a leaf."(p.146) A character
in another novel of Lightman's, The Diagnosis, loses all
function and, during the stages of his illness, is reduced to a
cypher tracing the shadows of a leaf along the floor of his bedroom. I
offer this quote as a possible explanation of my next comment. There
is a visceral quality to Lightman's prose that made me feel literally
sick to my stomach. Having read the book twice, I am still not completely
able to put my finger on why this is. Could it be the shadow
of his story affecting me? The Platonic ideal, the absolute story
that Lightman offers only subtextually?
Jonathan:
I confess I
chose this book for us to discuss because Bookninja.com seems a
place primarily (although not exclusively) for poets. With the main
character of Reunion a failed poet, I thought it might be
fun—if not delightfully antagonistic—to read a fiction writer who
has an obviously poetic prose style, writing a novel about the very
moment where the young poet does not come-of-age as an artist. Moreover,
not only does Charles fail as a poet, he goes on to become a professor
of literature at a minor liberal arts college. How perfectly horrid.
So, Reunion is a kind of anti-Kunstlerroman.
K,
as you say, there is something about Lightman’s prose itself that
rather creeps inside one. It’s surgical but somehow tender too.
How to characterize it? For me it’s as if someone very good has
translated it into English from something else—from French perhaps—giving
it that odd, over-reconciled, feel. Yes, you know, reading Reunion
I swear I heard Kundera. Not Life is Elsewhere, as you might
expect, but that one he put out in the nineties, Slowness:
this, because of the prose a little, but also because of the temporal
looseness and parallel narratives. In both books there is a simultaneous
nature to the fictional world where memory is not memory per se
but a live sentence, re-looping, eternally, in the background.
Lightman
was, of course, a physicist before he came to his senses and turned
to literature to discover all the really fetching answers. Einstein’s
Dreams, Lightman’s first novel, was as elliptical and cerebral
as one might expect. Reunion hums unexpectedly along the
threshold of nostalgia. But he’s playing with it the entire way.
With the way the young poet yearns for his own little piece of Degas
in the raw, with the way Charles the older sees his younger self
be played by a college professor just like he himself would become.
It’s all pirouettes and mirrors.
K,
two things. One, what did you make of our young ballerina—the hunger
artist? Second, I thought it curious you thought of Plato. Did you
read it as a realist novel or parody? I wondered a little if it
could be a kind of morality tale? Warning, that if one doesn’t stand
tall and firm and fight for one’s true destiny (i.e., a poet in
this case), then one will be cast into a kind of hell, sentenced
to an endless reunion with ones own failed selves?
Steven:
I don’t know about that, J. I think that Charles did attempt to
stand up for his “true destiny” when he asked his whacko dancer
girl to keep the baby. If I got anything in the way of a moral message,
it’s that heartbreak can cripple you if you’re a morose, self obsessed
little shit. I have to confess, K, that I completely missed, and
continue to miss, the Platonic subtext. Could you elaborate?
I
think this book contains some wonderful writing. Lightman’s prose,
though it didn’t move me to nausea, is utterly fantastic. The sentences
are crisp and spare and poetic, never overdone, never melodramatic.
I think he’s a hell of a good writer.
However,
I have to say I didn’t find this book particularly remarkable. If
we weren’t having this discussion, I would have put it down after
100 or so pages. I never really much cared about Charles the elder
or Charles the younger. Actually, I found the character(s) pretty
annoying. This is a genre of American novel I’m not fond of. I think
that the middle-aged professor whose wife has left him looking back
on his life novel is the American equivalent of Canadian landscape
fiction. There’s not a lot in Reunion
that Richard Ford didn’t do in The
Sportswriter (which,
to be fair, I’m not overly fond of either),
probably better.
I
found the story utterly predictable, and at no point was even remotely
surprised by anything that happened. You’re set-up with a guy who’s
going to his 30-year university reunion. Three pages in and you
see this guy’s heart is not overflowing with happiness. The reasonable
projection is that he’ll do some reminiscing at said reunion and
in some way address his unhappiness. Which is exactly what happens.
Then you get to the sub story. A kid falls in love. Well, we already
know that this kid, once he’s grown up, isn’t with the girl he falls
in love with. So it doesn’t take a genius to see that he’s going
to get his heart broken. The particulars of each story are completely
generic.
I’d
describe the book as an extraordinarily well-written gaze into the
navel of the pathetic and ultimately uneventful life of a myopic,
self-absorbed poet (in itself, almost a stereotype). Thoughts?
JB:
Is the reader to actually believe that Charles sits in a dark room
alone at his reunion and, what: daydreams, dreams, re-lives somehow,
his earlier years? Does he literally meet his younger self? I don’t
think this should be read as a realist novel. Were it so, Steven,
your issues with the plot and its predictability, with the whole
tired American campus novel sub-genre, would be all that should
be said about this book.
I’m
going to argue that it transcends all this. Obviously the reader
is asked to look on the young poet (he’s even a wrestler too—I mean
pl-ease!) with the wisdom of age and see the boy’s torment for what
it is: raw, cringe-inducing youth. Been there, done that many times.
But I think where the book becomes a success is that it does not
privilege the older Charles either. Age is no guarantee of righteousness.
They are both flawed, both pathetic and as such the book lacks a
hero altogether.
For
me, Lightman lays out all the clichés here but skirts them, mostly
through his prose style itself, but also through his meta-narrative
technique. I don’t think he is asking us to feel either sorry for,
or identify with either character. No, I think we are being asked
to suspend our usual novelistic expectations. This book is a kind
of underhanded parody—or judgement, but that might be too strong—whose
goal is to show how, as you say Steven, that a “gaze into the navel
of the pathetic and ultimately uneventful life” makes a damn pathetic
and uneventful book. But only if someone else writes it. Because,
paradoxically, I didn’t find Lightman’s book pathetic or uneventful
at all. It had other business. The book was ungenerous towards Charles
at both ages. As a reader I was left un-manipulated if not un-moved
altogether by Charles. Instead of loathing him or the book, I found
myself loathing all the other books that star “a Charles” but are
not smart enough to see that solipsistic books about regretful university
professors make sentimental reads.
KK:
Well. Lightman is foremost a physicist. I'm sure he wouldn't
like that ring around his neck but I can't help saying it. Formally,
the book succeeds. It has an inevitability that drives and drives
to its perfect ending. It's mathematical, precise. I finished the
book and put it down and said aloud, it's a good book.
Back
to the nausea, though. Here's this aging American non-poet
teacher who goes to a reunion, which in itself is pretty unbelievable
taking into consideration what a depressed failure he seems to be,
who proceeds to try to access his man-child from way back when his
stomach muscles were ripped and could attract a pretty girl, unlike
his nowadays heavy breasted girlfriend who lies heavy on his chest
(p. 3). Here's a fairly naive man-child who even as a youth made
a fairly ineffectual knight in shining armour to a girl who anyway
didn't really want rescuing. They get pregnant and he tries to capture
her by obliging her not to have an abortion. Steve, I think you
are dead right about him trying to assert his true identity here.
But I don't think his true identity is a pretty thing to watch.
He's a sniper trying to take someone down with him. He decides to
relate to the creepy professor, an obvious mirror to his creepy
future. He decides this because it feels manly and rubs his ego;
he's been let into the depressing adult world by this man and feels
somehow grateful. And about the ballerina. I found it disturbing
that Lightman chooses for his main character's love interest such
an obvious enigma. Nothing quite as sexy as an anorexic, eh?
In
his adult life, he is divorced by someone who sounds really swell,
a woman who left him a house that she paid for and he's surly about
it. The ungrateful little... His girlfriend Sheila is too real for
him. She wants him to cut a cheque for Oxfam, for the hurricane
victims in Honduras. Charles talks of Honduras as if it is mere
imagery -- pixilation on a TV. Only that which takes place in his
head seems to resonate for him. Weirdly, The Diagnosis begins
with a token gift to a beggar. I wondered if Lightman was making
some literary offering to the gods before he embarked on his novelistic
journey.
Plato
had this concept of an absolute world where there is an ideal apple
from which we all form our concept of appleness -- Is the young
Charles a sort of ideal in Lightman's view and the old Charles the
real one, the one who, when brought to the light, reminds Charles
of Charles and so he recognises himself? I wanted to give Lightman
the intellectual benefit of the doubt, I suppose. I expect he's
very clever. Plato comes in a lot to The Diagnosis, by the
way.
Lightman
is a relativist, I think, well, if Einstein's Dreams is any
indication. "Absolute motion is unobservable. Only the relative
motion between objects has any meaning." (p. 6, Reunion)
Lightman's
prose has something of that sense of relativity, that liberalism
in which all things are equal in morality. It cuts its linguistic
tension from that flatness but it also experiences its problems
there. If everything is only observable in relation to something
else, where is the centre? And if I really read the text, I find
it misogynistic. If I'm kind and try to look beneath the text, I
catch glimpses of this other story he's trying to tell. It is poignant,
the story of an older man grappling with mistakes he made along
the way. But I still find his shorthand for ideal perfection in
this ballerina tiresome. It's too easy, like he's casting a Hollywood
movie.
SG:
I am not a person who likes to draw undue attention to my ignorance.
I also don’t really like poking at a book’s flaws. But I’m just
not seeing the larger picture here. I am not seeing the point at
which I should have stopped reading the text as a novel, suspending
my typical expectations, and bought into this meta-narrative notion.
Not even in hindsight. Frankly, I can’t even see what possible clues
exist, other than a nagging feeling I have that this guy is too
good a writer to have written such an unremarkable narrative. Perhaps
I should have read his other books, which I haven’t. Is this something
that needs to be done to get this novel?
I
agree, K, the book is technically sound. It establishes its parametres
and takes them to their logical conclusions. I would argue it does
it a little too well, in an almost mechanical way. The conclusion
is so inevitable, and so movie-of-the-week, that it had no resonance
for me whatsoever. I also agree that there is a misogynistic streak
running through the book. None of the female characters had much
substance, and were mainly defined in terms of their sexual relationship
with Charles. At this point, though, I’m unsure of how to proceed,
because if this meta-narrative exists then this is all irrelevant.
If,
as you say, J, Reunion is intended to show me, the reader
who’s just traded thirty bucks and five or six hours of my life
for the experience of reading this book, that the sort of book this
is just doesn’t work, well that just pisses me off. I, and most
other people, have better things to do than read a work that’s designed
to fail. I’m still not sure, though, that this is what Lightman
is up to. What’s the point? Why would anyone spend the years it
takes to write a book, particularly a writer who possesses Lightman’s
skill with language, when the intent is to produce a work that will
irritate people because its entire conception is inherently flawed?
How do you walk into your editor’s office and proclaim “It’s brilliant
because it doesn’t work at all”?
Or
maybe he did. And maybe some people like this. Maybe they think
it’s brilliant. Good for them, I say. Enjoy. I’m just not one of
them. It strikes me as vaguely wankish.
JB:
Steven,
yes you are right, if one is going to wank one should not go about
it vaguely. What’s my point? Let me try and get at it another way.
Why did Lightman write this book? No idea. But Amlit is full of
campus novels. I’d say they are a scourge. They have been so overdone
that even David Lodge has made fun of them (note to self, re-read
Nice Work—you need a good laugh.) And furthermore, why write
yet another “portrait of a poet as a young man” novel?
I
think Lightman’s project is one of distain for all of it: for men
like Charles—both as his failure as a young lover and poet, and
as his larger failure as a man—and, for Hollywood-hopeful authors
who continue to write sentimental books about middle-aged college
professors who get laid by young, pretty students. He shows these
characters, and their authors, up for what they are: wankers.
The
very idea that Charles should experience his younger self in a magical
dream at his college reunion is a pretty trite device. That’s how
poor an “artist” is Charles. It shows, simultaneously, how completely
self-absorbed and untalented he is. We are supposed to see him as
an impotent in every way.
As
for Charles being a misogynist, well, I think it’s a big word that
is loaded. I like to reserve the term for clear-cut cases because
my fear is that it’ll be shop-worn right when it’s need most. So,
in my mind, Charles is too self-absorbed to have much energy left
to hate womankind. I think he’s at far greater risk of not properly
getting to know the women in his life than he is of hating them.
Kathryn,
I think the reason why you can’t quite put your finger on the subtext,
the shadowy Platonic references, the relativist core (oh my sides),
is because you’re looking for a novel that isn’t there. Possibly
you’re looking for the novel that Lightman is parodying. I see Lightman’s
meaning as right on the surface. I talked in the beginning about
the prose style, the feeling as if it was translated; to me this
over-considered workmanship is the result of an author who is exacting.
He’s not left the “real” novel buried. He’s attacking the two sub-genres
I mentioned earlier. It doesn’t have the usual sign-posts of meta-fiction
I agree, but, at the risk of reductionism, this a novel that trashes
nostalgic novels much like itself. If you need more proof, look
at the final lines—which I won’t transcribe to spare folks who read
books to get to the end. But Charles does not experience any growth.
He remains completely unchanged. Stuck. The same as he’s always
been. Any other novel would have the hero succeed or fail, or grow
in self-understanding and reach out to those (in this case women)
around him. He’d learn to give as well as receive, or else he would
self-destruct. This novel shows how farcical an idea such as this
is. Men like this don’t change. And novels that pretend they do
are sentimental stories and deserve to be parodied, or at least
criticized.
I
think that’s it for me. I shall give it over to the both of you
for final thoughts. I’ve enjoyed this a great deal. Cross-between
a doing a review (bad) and a conversation over drinks (good). Next
time, I’ll buy.
SG:
I just found out we wouldn’t be paid to do this. What a rip off.
I totally misunderstood what “reverse omnibus” means, apparently.
I’m
clearly not a reader who goes for the sort of book that requires
me to grasp the fact that there’s a meta-narrative (I’m still a
little suspicious of the very existence of this concept). If a book’s
going to have these levels, I’d say it’d have to work on all the
levels for me to buy the concept. I’m not particularly fond of,
sniff, “high” literature, by which I mean work whose intent is deliberately
obscure. It makes me feel stupid, which I don’t enjoy and don’t
need to read books to do.
With
Reunion, I’m still not sure if it was just a poorly plotted
work of American realism, or if there was something else going on
that flew far, far above my radar, and continues to do so.
This
wasn’t a bad book. It just wasn’t a good book. It didn’t appeal
to me on very many levels. I do think, however, that the author
has a superb command of language, and that if he ever wrote something
with a story that has some legs it could very well be a good novel.
KK:
I wouldn't suggest Charles is a misogynist along the lines of, say,
Celine, or better Cendrars (both of whom I much prefer to Lightman,
btw), but that Lightman is. His choices are alarming. That's all.
I certainly don't mean misogynistic in any extreme way. Just the sort
who has an insidious distaste for people who also happen to be women,
especially women who aren't starving themselves for the greater cause
of ideal physical beauty. It gets my shackles up. As
for subtext, I was giving Lightman the benefit of the doubt. But
I suppose being a good writer doesn't necessitate writing a good
book. Reunion is pretty and shiny but it ain't the real thing.
If I hadn't taken this discussion on, I wouldn't have made the effort
to read any of his other books. It was Einstein's Dreams
and The Diagnosis that made me a little more curious about
Lightman's fascinations. Truly one ought not have to do this much
work to penetrate a novel; too coy, no? And I would rather not bother
unless the outer story makes it worthwhile. Jonathan, if what you
say is true and Lightman is parodying just this sort of novel, then
press your ear up to the screen for my big fat raspberry. Shouldn't
a parody be funny? Sheesh. And if the subtext I'm hoping for is
not there, then in the final analysis, I'm not impressed. A great
writer without a story.
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